Love Song Lyrics?

I want ur advice on this song I wrote...








I try not to worry


about what happens next


but everytime I get alone


I can't seem to forget


Your the one who makes me laugh


and the one who makes me cry


You give me will to carry on


When I don't wanna try


But if something should happen


to seperate us two


I wonder would it change


the way I feel for you





If I lose you


Will my life be the same


Will my heart still skip a beat


Everytime I hear your name


If I lose you


Will my tears still fall like rain


Will I put up a smile


Though I'm covered in my pain


If I lose you??


Well troubles come and troubles go


and we still stay together


Is it true that true love lasts


from now until forever??


I keep hope that we won't lose


This gift that God has given


But I'm not one who deserves


This precious life I'm livin


I won't regret whats happened here


The way I felt for you


And I won't forget those happy times


I know you felt it too


I'll still remember our first kiss


On that sunny day


I'll keep it deep inside my heart


Don't think it'll fade away


Rainy nights won't get me down


Yea I'll be just fine


I'll reminisce on our first love


the smile inside shall shine

Love Song Lyrics?
PULL IT OFF BEFORE SOMEONE STEALS IT AND PARIS HILTON SINGS IT.
Reply:Awesome! Though I don't know if you should really be posting this online, someone could steal it.


Amazing work, though. Get yourself a record deal and quick! Report Abuse

Reply:I love it. Its really good Report Abuse

Reply:you know what? i love it. i think you have some talent there! Report Abuse

Reply:no, i don't like song lyrics. thanks for asking.
Reply:this seems very honest and heartfelt,i think it will reach people and they will respond to it,,
Reply:Ooo thanks for my new song!!!


Just kidding but for real you shouldn't be posting song lyrics online!!!


good song
Reply:this is soo cute! i LOVE it! check out mine! im posting it in a second
Reply:AWESOMEEEEEE I ITE GET U A RECORD DEAL:)))
Reply:sounds like you can give it a pop/rnb sound...good luck!
Reply:can't wait to hear it put to music.
Reply:Personally, as a somewhat older adult (45) I like it. I would love to hear someone put it to music. Of course it would also depend if you chose to use it as a fast song or a ballad (I would chose)