Are these good lyrics for a love song?

In the canal of compassion.


I think of you every day


We can talk by the bay


The bay of out hearts as we sail away


Into the canal of compassion


Were the considerate swans play,


We can talk for hours on end


And watch the rose sun set,


Into the champagne ocean.


Were we watch our hearts float together


in the canal of compassion.











my boyfriend wrote it for me but i wouldnt know good music lyrics if the paper was right in front of my face.'





its really sweet that he wrote it for me but i want to kow if he spent alot of time on it or got it from the internet.

Are these good lyrics for a love song?
awww thats so lovely!! that came from his head defintaley and its soo sweet.... dont be so quick to judge next time he does something like this for you!! it wasnt nice to hear that you thought it might have been from the internet.. it sounds like he really loves you from looking at the lyrics..
Reply:Well, since you've posted this personal song he wrote for you, someone can copy %26amp; paste it somewhere else, to take credit for it. He spent alot of time on it.... now someone else will get it from the internet!!!
Reply:its very lovely. i wouldnt know how long he spent on it.


i write some poetry or sing songy lyrics that when thinking of my guy ...it can just come in an instant because that is how my mind works and inspiration comes easily when i think of him. i wouldnt know if your guy's stuff comes from the internet or not unless i actually recogized it. which i dont.


savor his ability to express himself poetically and want to share it with you. peace